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"The Land of Laughs was lit by by eyes that saw the lights that no one's seen." - Jonathan Carroll
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I have a rage of fire
that you ignite
you know the one that burns the brightest in the evening sky
the one that smolders quietly during the day
hardly seen, nor felt
except when teeth are bared
and thoughts of your dimples take hold
clutching me like there's no tomorrow
and worst,
there's no night, where the shiniest star ever
sears the vast expanse, leaving but trails of ashes,
in its wake.
If, I were to die, it would be a blessed event,
where I wouldn't have to miss another moment
without you, as you rise within the flames
and explode, scattering our parts,
as if they were not even attached.
Falling, later from the moon like fairy dust,
glittering as frost in an early morning's dawn.
So, when you want me bold, beautiful and bright,
watch for tears and pieces of my heart trailing after you.
Look to the sky, find Venus and never let it fall from your eyes,
or have your lips speak another's name.
Drive the flame ever higher,
embarrass the sun with its mere blinding view,
this heat melts the very stones that gave it all birth.
As I have heard you ask before, "What have you done?"
I made light where before there was nothing but darkness,
gave Venus her name, left Prometheus a bit of spark,
found Earth for you to keep and make it a home.
All of this and more, just by fanning a tiny little ember,
making it grow and driving our passions deep, deeper
far into the afterglow of Venus, all night long...
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I have a rage of fire
that you ignite
you know the one that burns the brightest in the evening sky
the one that smolders quietly during the day
hardly seen, nor felt
except when teeth are bared
and thoughts of your dimples take hold
clutching me like there's no tomorrow
and worst,
there's no night, where the shiniest star ever
sears the vast expanse, leaving but trails of ashes,
in its wake.
If, I were to die, it would be a blessed event,
where I wouldn't have to miss another moment
without you, as you rise within the flames
and explode, scattering our parts,
as if they were not even attached.
Falling, later from the moon like fairy dust,
glittering as frost in an early morning's dawn.
So, when you want me bold, beautiful and bright,
watch for tears and pieces of my heart trailing after you.
Look to the sky, find Venus and never let it fall from your eyes,
or have your lips speak another's name.
Drive the flame ever higher,
embarrass the sun with its mere blinding view,
this heat melts the very stones that gave it all birth.
As I have heard you ask before, "What have you done?"
I made light where before there was nothing but darkness,
gave Venus her name, left Prometheus a bit of spark,
found Earth for you to keep and make it a home.
All of this and more, just by fanning a tiny little ember,
making it grow and driving our passions deep, deeper
far into the afterglow of Venus, all night long...
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Re: The Land of Laughs
Sat, July 18, 2009 - 11:51 PMhey there, Glen
I like this one..i usually like the poetries that wake smth in me...and this is what this one does..:)
" So, when you want me bold, beautiful and bright,
watch for tears and pieces of my heart trailing after you. "
See ya,
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Re: The Land of Laughs
Mon, July 20, 2009 - 11:03 AMtHANKS AnDy
very nice to hear from, hope you are doing well and being as bold, beautiful and bright as can be.
smth?
something
yes something is some awakening
In the Mirror
A manually operated machine
Can hardly see a forest before a tree
A dream within a mind
Weighs heavily upon time
Mirrors spoke distorted
Reflecting clever masquerades
Dividing line remote
Sorcery begged to differ
Staged numb less debate
Woke between a slumber
With mental abstractions
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Re: The Land of Laughs
Mon, July 27, 2009 - 6:15 AMHey there, Glen
Yes, smth..or something..he he...love is in the air..la la la...regarding love :)
Hey, i love poetry..i simply love it...makes me warm inside ..and so on..
BUt i don't understand why only a few people like the poetry....i don't know..either they are not interested, either they are senseless, they have no emotions...no feelings....who knows..
It pisses me of when people are more interested to join tribes with sex topics than one like this...
Poetry is a great way to express...then when u are not good with verbalizing .... or simply is a release...
Have a nice time Glen..glad u are here...
Aye , Aye ... :)
Andy
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Re: The Land of Laughs
Wed, July 29, 2009 - 10:44 AM"BUt i don't understand why only a few people like the poetry"
if you did understand, you might not be one of the few, but the few are a lot more than it sometimes appears.
".i don't know..either they are not interested, either they are senseless, they have no emotions...no feelings....who knows.. "
not interested, there are other interests to have, I have some, never stray far from poetry and prose.
verbal age, and the written word,
the shadows knows.......
Coming, going
Without flesh its just a disembodied voice with a false front, sometimes revealing extreme fearlessness, sometimes not. When coming to the point, its face to face, or not at all. If, you know what I know, youll feel different, what a welcome change that would be. Im always coming, going to the next big thing, never arriving, except to say hello. Ive waited this long. Will another moment be too long? The first mistake led to another and another, too many to count, but they taught some lessons, some forgot, some not. Too slow to make much sense, but for fleeting seconds, stretching for miles. Vision so obscure, the images flickering, in a beat that spoke emotion. Some pleas and shouts, attention sought, but much disdain was visited, no discouragement is enough to stop, Im coming, going to the next little thing thats somewhere on the way to you.
.glad u are here...
me toos
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